Pre-Production Video Discussion - Part Three
Here is the final part of our Pre-Production Video Discussion. The video included me, Mattis Weidmann and Sophie Campbell.


LINK TO PART ONE
LINK TO PART TWO






There are some documents that will be mentioned once the video has been uploaded. I believe these mainly consist of the research taken into particular audiences. So here are the documents shown in the video (and another one, Sophie decided to add some addition analysis) these were both completed by Sophie Campbell. I however will be taking an own personal interest into the audience we're looking at through some statistics on IMDB in the next few days, I will upload these in a separate post later. Also, if you would like to read more about the music choice (as briefly mentioned in the video) click here and here.

ORIGINAL SURVEY

ORIGINAL SURVEY PLUS ANALYSIS

Thriller Case Studies - Introduction and Psycho
Thriller Case Studies - Introduction and Psycho

Here I've uploaded the case studies about 4 different thriller films, the introduction will explain the bulk of it. However I have had some trouble and lost my fourth case study - The Godfather - but at the weekend I shall redo it (hopefully to the same standard) and upload it. Also I am including extra parts to the case studies which is why they shall be uploaded one by one, as these extra pieces have not all been completed.

INTRODUCTION

THRILLER CASE STUDY 1 - PSYCHO (1960)



Animatic Storyboard
Here is the video of our part-completed Animatic Storyboard. It's used as almost a planning edit so we could just see how the story would flow. Everything is discussed briefly in video. Will be discussed more thoroughly and formally during the evaluation stage - we shall see if this actually helped out production stage and also what changed we have made, or did it even look anything like it?... Enjoy!

Animatic Storyboard
Edited by Kennet Tanner and illustrated by Mattis Weidmann.
"Makes Your Bones Grow Strongerer"

"Makes Your Bones Grow Strongerer"

No, this isn't a post about Petit Filous. Last night I went to the cinema to see a free preview screening of The Lovely Bones. It's new all singing, all dancing drama/thriller film at the hands of Peter Jackson. Granted he's well known and loved for his adaptation of Lord of the Rings, but it doesn't take a genius to put Lord of the Rings on screen. It takes a shit load of money. 'Visionary Director of Lord of the Rings' just seemed a step too far on my part. So I wasn't particularly too enthusiastic that this film would wow me. But it did.

However, If it hadn't been for my Media background (and the old man who laughed like an electronic Santa that's running out of batteries during crucially gripping scenes) I'd have enjoyed the film much much more. I was sat constantly pointing out to my friend Sophie that 'oooh, I liked that shot... oh that was a nice shot... hmm good symbolism!" and quite often I'd throw in those things that make film lovers cringe - continuity errors. Apparently this film is abundant with errors due to the clumsy adaptation by Peter Jackson himself. But as I've not read the book I didn't spot these, maybe I should've... who knows. "That's a good shot". But during the scene after Susie Salmon declares the day she is about to get murdered, Mr. Harvey wore his glasses, then took them off, went to the curtains to close them. From the outside you can clearly see a shadow which INCLUDED his glasses. Hmmm... clumsy indeed.

I thought the acting was pretty flawless too, this is of course if I wanna deviate from the poorly cast Mark Wahlberg the 90s rapper turned Hollywood Actor as the devastated father during the film. His acting seemed wooden, and the character poorly written. It was strange to see him contrasted with the pretty perfect Rachel Weisz, not sure what to make of Susan Sarandon in her awkwardly written role. (Which while we're at it seemed seriously out of place, it felt slightly like watching someone take a dump in the middle of a funeral ceremony. - Maybe I should stop writing the post, while I still like the film, Media A Level you are a cruel mistress) The 'child' actors were really well acted though. I thought they were very very very good and believable. The child actor who played the little boy managed to convey the sense of incomprehensible death of his older sister.

The film did however encase one the most butt-clenching scenes I've ever seen. Without screwing you over and spoiling the film, when Susie's sister is in Mr. Harvey's house prepared to be thoroughly gripped... and thoroughly thrilled. It was interesting to look at though because the scene featured no music up until one point, and it added more to the atmosphere than if the sound would have been there (much like the use of silence in Francis Lawrence's I Am Legend) I thought this was so interesting to see, that we're going to see how it's going to work in our own thriller when we come to editing. That's basically what this post was for, to tell you that minute piece of detail in a really long way. But I hope you've enjoyed reading my somewhat cynical view on The Lovely Bones... even if I did think it was fantastic.
ALternative Audio Ideas
Today I went and found the original music that we had decided to use during the scene featuring Emily Gates walking through the streets of Norwich and Reepham (the script has yet to be posted, due to problems using blogger at College, hopefully it shall be up in the next few days) we found a track on freeplaymusic.com which we thought was suitable.

The rack is called "Rain Window" and you can find it here. and we love it because it has a sense of looking back, which where the film opens too is brilliant because the character Emily Gates would be looking back at what had previously happened. But also the underlying track feels like it's building up to something which is essentially what will be being shown on the screen. As we'll be using some dramatic irony as the audience will discover she's being followed before she does. It's a peice of music that when played against the background of the animatic storyboard (also uploaded within the next few days) it really fits the felling that Emily Gates is full of sorrow. Have a listen and see what you think
Pre-Production Video Discussion - Part Two

Here we have the second part of the video discussion that took place between me, Sophie Campbell and Mattis Weidmann.



There are a few documen ts shown and read out in the discussion so I shall post them here, to read at your own leisure.

Okay here we have the original Character Biographies. These were the ones that were spoken about in the video, however due to bad feedback about these biographies it prompted me to re-do these with more of an insight into the different conventions etc that we're using when thinking about the characters.

FIRST CHARACTER BIOGRAPHIES


As you can see this sort of acts more as a background to the character and doesn't give the reader any insight into why they're being used. This sort of text is more useful for actors etc to get into the role. So as preparation we gave Grace (Emily Gates) and Will (Joshua Moore) these sheets when they got the scripts. This was just another step we took to try and make the acting as authentic and realistic as possible without having it feel like a poor amateur piece of film.

SECOND CHARACTER BIOGRAPHIES

Hopefully you can see these display more of an insight and also an influence from other films in the same genre.

Here you can see the pictures of the characters Emily and Joshua these were drawn by Mattis and hopefully have helped to display just a little about the characters that they are showing. I really like the style of the drawings, which match the Animatic Storyboard. It really helps convey the grungy sense of the film we're hoping to achieve . Also, below you can see the poster used for advertising the roles of Emily Gates and Joshua Moore. We acted under the title KSM by collating all of our initials Kennet Sophie Mattis (just in case that wasn't obvious for you)




























For storyboard pictures: http://rapidshare.com/files/376213768/storyboard_pictures.zip.html

Music Ideas for Thriller Opening

Music Ideas for 'Creed'


At the time of writing this post I'm awaiting a confirmation from a brilliant artist named 'Bo Bruce' for permission to use her music in the opening of our thriller film.
I'm excited, and so is our group, because she's a brilliant artist. She featured about a year ago on Orange Unsigned Act on Saturday and Sunday mornings and grabbed my attention, and since then I've had some correspondence with her and followed her every musical move imprinted on the internet.
So, when it came to choosing our music, we'd chosen some off of freeplaymusic.com (which I will post through the school network, as I cannot access my files at home) but we felt that it just felt a bit tacky doing so, none of the music sounds particularly like a real film score. We're just trying to make our opening feel as authentic as possible and when we've spoken to people about what they like in films it's good music. I've also noted this through one of the earliest uses of music in thriller films to create an atmosphere, when I wrote a case studio on Alfred Hitchcock's 1960 horror Psycho.
So we're keen on using her music as it'd add a depth to our film that I just don't think we'd get from other sources of music. Bo's voice is so beautifully haunting and the lyrics for one song of our consideration seemingly could be seen to represent our storyline;

Fighting Arizona - Lyrics

Here's to people slowly walking by
Here's to you you're back on the inside
Fighting Arizona all alone
With just one arm
You're on your own

No dance with the dragon
You chased him away
You wrote me a letter
Here's to all you say
This is the end you can't climb farther down
It's Arizona's final round

If you make it out alive
I promise I will be there soon
I'll tell the world that my friends coming home
If you be my lost my found
Reject your dark, reject your crown
I swear you'll never go back down
Never go back down

Back to this day
We'll find you again
The shame of your number
You are still my friend

So if you make it out alive
I promise i will be there soon
I'll tell the world that my friends coming home
And if you be my lost my found
Reject your dark, reject your crown
I swear you'll never go back down
Never go back down

But this is the last i'm here
The last I'm for
The last time you'll be on your own

So if you make it out alone
I promise i will be there soon
I'll tell the world that my friends coming home
And if you be my lost my found
Reject your dark, reject your crown
I swear you'll never go back down
Never go back down



A reasonable amount of this song could clearly represent the narrative of our story. For example the opening line will be shown while Emily Gates will be walking through the streets of Norwich late at night, these could even be slow motion shots to fit the pace of the music. The lines all seem to fit perfectly, that Joshua comes to see Emily after being missing for an entire year, due to being kidnapped by a cult 'never go back down' and 'I'll tell the world that my friend's coming home'. I also love the haunting piano and the sense of isolation the music and the lyrics are accessing. The video above shown is one of a live showing during 'Orange Unsigned Act', however this is not the version we would be using the studio version is much better suited to our needs which you can see that here under 'fightingarizonademo'.

There are of course some other songs from Bo that we could use due to the haunting sound of her music and her voice, such as Black Ice (Acoustic version would be much suited):



It has a brilliant sort of sorrow sound, which would be brilliant and again the lyrics could fit perfectly to the storyline. "Does my voice sound different?" and "I don't know why you're not here, I can't feel why, I won't cry" standing out as favorites to slotting into our scene and narrative perfectly.

However... all of this is just hoping, I'm currently waiting for a reply from Bo and hopefully we'll get a thumbs up, if not watch this space for alternatives, and if you wanna read anymore about Bo and watch her awesome cover of My Girl by Madness click here.

Kenny

Sherlock Holmes... Symbolism Overkill

Sherlock Holmes - Symbolism Overkill

I've not really put too much effort into the analysis of this film, mainly cause it was just something I noticed while watching it.
Sherlock Holmes is the latest in the line of Guy Ritchie flicks, but I've personally never especially loved the guy's work. Just something about it, but Sherlock Holmes did look pretty exciting by the trailers and I think since Robert Downey Jr.'s revamped career in 2005 he's become an amazing actor. His roles in Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang and Iron Man particularly impressed me.
So, I decided I would see the film. I was pretty open minded throughout the film and yeah, I did enjoy it. But there was one thing that really bugged me throughout the film. The crows, or raven symbolism.
Before and after every death scene you saw a raven appear and then leave. Obviously Guy Ritchie's taken an attempt to use 'subtle' conventions of thriller films, particularly those by Alfred Hitchcock. But I'm not sure if everyone else noticed while watching but the crows seemed to be blindingly obvious! There were no surprises in the storyline cause it was shown every time someone was about to die! Okay, yeah it kinda worked, but it didn't work well, symbolism needs to be subtle!
During the film's climax I noticed a nearly subtle symbol, when a raven flew past, but no i was mistaken the next shot was a 4 second close up of the raven landing nearby, oh looks like someones about to die!
So through noticing these crucial complaints from me, a film lover. I've decided that during the open of our thriller we're going to try and keep our symbols very subtle. However, I do have doubts that I only noticed this because I've been studying these conventions recently, so I'll ask people who have seen the film if they've noticed therefore influencing our decisions in the making of our Thriller Opening.
Please post if you did or didn't notice these raven/crows!


Pre-Production Video Discussion - Part One
Pre-Production Video Discussion - Part One

As we are nearing the end of the pre-production phase our group decided to get together and basically make a video documentation of what we've been doing so far, how well things have gone etc. We eventually ended up talking for about 30 mins, so I decided to save you from having your brain melting out of your ears by the time you were done to split it up into several smaller videos pointing at different areas. In the video we have me, Sophie Campbell and Mattis Weidmann

LINK TO PART TWO



As promised here are the documents spoken about in the video. We have the Creed script, this is close to the one shown in the video, but the document was lost and had to be re-written and when I did this I made some minor changes. At time of posting we've filmed a lot of the production and I can tell you that quite a lot of things have been changed, so I will most likely write up a script after the completed video has been uploaded. I'm sure you can understand as while we were out filming we saw different problems during the filming, and as a result of this had to change some parts. One major issue was the lighting, but I shall go into more depth with that during my evaluation unit.





Donkey Punch
While flicking through the channels late two nights ago I came across a film that was airing due to the bombardment of 'seasonal' film screening on Channel 4. I'd not especially come across this film before, nor had I heard much about it. The horror thriller genre isn't really one in which I enjoy insinuating into. Despite my attempt to find the entertainment in watching a film that can scare you to your very core. I can't. Haven't. And doubt I ever will, to be truthful.
So anyway I tuned in quite near to the start, not terribly certain how much I had missed and it made perfect sense none-the-less so I wasn't particularly worried. At first I was drawn in by trying to work out who the girl named 'Kim' was played by, it struck me only about 5 minutes from the end in an 'Oh,-she-was-from-Kidulthood-and-Dead-Set!'-moment (surprisingly I really enjoyed Dead Set, I was compelled to watch as my English teacher had thrust a love of all things Charlie Brooker upon me. Perhaps one of the only horror's that I've enjoyed, the interesting character development and the fantastic cameo's made the whole show really worth while - Davina McCall standing out in excellence!) my brain was also aching to find out who one of the male characters reminded me of - turns out... no-one? I couldn't work it out, I've since researched him to check he wasn't from anything I've seen, but nothing odd? - so I was enjoying watching these childish teenagers embark on their yacht. The show seemingly aimed itself towards the same audience as those of American 'teen' flicks such as American Pie. This seemed apparent by showing the same sort of 'care free sleep with whoever' lifestyle people in their early twenties apparently have.
So I was happily just watching away waiting for the storyline to kick in, which I had no idea what was about if I'm totally honest I'd not heard of this disgusting 'Donkey Punch' sexual act before... So that happened in the film, which was all a bit fast and extremely unbelievable (and quite gross too) and the storyline jumped to a go. The first 20 minutes of the film will all the dirty sex talk and the subsequent sex seemed to kind of have a meaning when but into conjuction with that of the storyline catalyst, and I was torn between my disire to turn of the programme and sleep or watch and discover what happened to these reasonably beleivable characters. I chose to watch, and I'm glad I did. The film was simply fantastic! - In an odd kind of 'i'm-gonna-be-disturbed-forever' kind of way. But the characters ways of coping with the fact that one of their peers (and sibling of one, which did indeed make the first 20 minutes all the worse) had murdered someone in a sick sexual voilence act was brilliantly portrayed, and I think written too - and shot! There were many of the desolate shots of the yacht out in an open and lonely sea. I just thought the film was so interesting to watch, the way the characters changed so much in relation to death, and their fear of guilt and fear of jail (which says alot for the goverment system in the UK. I'm not sure if anyone else following my blog has seen this film, cause I would be intrested to find out what the rest of you thought about this film!